评《Please,HXH(HP)》

　　英文版里是在第52页的第18行有这么一句“Sirius was the very last of the line as his younger brother,Regulus,predeceased him and both were childless.”(小天狼星是他的家族里最后一个传人，因为他的弟弟雷古勒斯死在他之前，而他们都没有孩子)
\"my parents, with their pure-blood mania, convinced that to be a Black made you practically royal...my idiot brother, soft enough to believe them... He was younger than me, and a much better son, as I was constantly reminded...\"
—Sirius telling Harry Potter about Regulus
在第5本里，书中明确说明了小天狼星是雷古勒斯的哥哥——小天狼星说过“他比我小”
人文里说哥哥在这里：
【是啊，想当年，他可是你父亲在学校的好朋友。布莱克家的人都在我们学院，没想到小天狼星却到了格兰芬多！真可惜——他是个很有天分的男孩。他进校时，他哥哥雷古勒斯就在我们学院，要是两个人都在我那儿就好了。”】
　　英文原版是这样的：
　　【\"Well, anyway, he was a big pal of your father\'s at school. The whole Black family had been in my House, but Sirius ended up in Gryffindor! Shame—he was a talented boy. I got his brother, Regulus, when he came along, but I\'d have liked the set.\"】显然是人文翻译错了么……这个when he came along是指Regulus，整句话是说，不过我他的兄弟雷古勒斯进校我就得到他了，不过我更希望能得一双。
显然没说是哥哥啦，原文没这么写咯
另外，英国百科网这样写……
Regulus Arcturus Black (1961 - 1979), also known as R.A.B
Sirius Black III (c. 1959[1] - June 17, 1996)
——这都是算出来的啊……
罗琳同学不至于犯这么弱智的错啦
【【【【【当然了……你硬要把雷古勒斯说成哥哥也没啥……关键是……西里斯才是家族正统继承人啊……所以西里斯是家族重点培养对象，雷古勒斯属于二等货，西里斯是继承家族的“顶梁柱”，而他不负责任逃跑追求新理想去了，于是雷古勒斯为此承担责任……所以才被众人唾弃……你这么一写，整成家族抛弃长子，保留次子的爱护行为了，不符合布莱克家族的一贯风格……】】】】】

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