无主题作者：anna
i must say that your writing is very unique, full of ideas unlike other classic books.i just feel like crying when i read your work, it sadden my heart to see how xuan doing all this painful thing to wennuan. your writing has alot of ironic twist. i husee this is what keeps me reading this. personally, i hadn't experience any "love" affairs yet, but if love really is this terrible anf this... powerful, i can't find a word or words to describe it. i really think that i should think twice before think any of it. thank you, author, for your beautiful writing. i will treasure it always! oh, nice choice of muusic in the front cover, how come you become mfamilar with sooo many english music? 一3九九
[8楼] 网友：Shellet 发表时间：2010-10-16 17:33:56
Ignore the other comments, they're just being sour. Your English is the best I've seen in terms of grammatical correctness. Your mistakes were mainly in tense and subject-verb agreement, ie. saddened and ironic twists, and of course, 'I' not i. The others are just typos, I think. Do you live in an English-speaking country? Your English flows beautifully. I haven't finish reading 温暖的弦 yet. In fact I've only read the first chapter, but I believe it's a HE. |
