评《容修》

啊啊啊，写完啦！！！
首先，最重要的是：大大看下，如果不行，我立刻删除，不想给大大带来困扰。谢谢大大的允许～爱大大～
夜色笼罩的琴室里，悄无声息，静的可以听见呼吸声。
劲臣动了动手指，长时间的捆绑，血液有点流通不畅。领带的后段系在小支撑架上，为了防止支架滑落，劲臣只能努力让手贴着支撑架。
跪直的他，挺着腰。像是为来人奉献他的一切。
“咔——”
琴室的门开了，他听见了脚步声。被蒙住眼的他，其它感官更加的敏锐。
柑橘。
檀木。
劲臣鼻翼微动。记忆回笼。Ferry No.6，风衣，跟踪……
他今天犯错了，同那晚相似。
脚步声停止，唇贴上他的，缓慢而又漫长的窒息，让他整个人天旋地转。
容修抬手，抚摸上劲臣微颤的腰，“别动。”话落，容修便能感受到手下的腰肢僵住了。
“呵。”
耳边的轻笑，像微弱的电流。酥麻。
He feels his buttons are being unbuttoned.When he feels a little cold,a hand is touching his body.
Hot.
So Hot does the hand that he thinks he has a fever.
Itching.
新的触觉让劲臣有点紊乱的思绪略微清醒了点。
鞭……鞭子？白色羽毛鞭——那件礼物。
The new feeling crossed his chest.
He feels his nipples are being swept.
Pain.
Comfort.
“Ah……”
-“Keep quiet.”
A finger touchs his lips.He opens his month.
He thinks He can keep quiet.
容修笑了，“狡猾。”
He withdraws his finger.
-“I will hit you,using the whip.”
-“You should tell me the numbers from one to ten and you need to apologize to me.”
“Yes,my master.”
-“The punishment is beginning.”
“One.I was wrong.”
...
破风声停止。
Pain.
Itching.
Comfort.
-“Are you all right?My slave.”
“Yes,Iamfine.Master.”
领带被解开，高举的手还没有反应过来。
“啪。”
顶盖被合上。
容修手臂用力，将眼前人提起来往钢琴上放。
黑色斯坦威演奏级三角钢琴，衬得眼前人的皮肤光滑灼眼。
-“I will use your mouth.My slave.”
“Yes,My master.”
Gu is kneeling on the piano.
He unfastens master's belt.
The pink knife touchs his mouth.He opens his mouth.
Big.
Long.
He is very satisfied.
This is his master's smell.
A hand is thouch his buns with a little cold.
“En...”
Enterance and agitation.
One.
Two.
Three...
He want to talk but something in his mouth.
眼角泛红，泪光闪烁。
He withdraws his pink knife.
-“Heads or tails. ”
“Heads,I want to see master's face.”
-“I will satisfy you.My slave.”
Gu raises his hands,which around Rong's neck.Gu also puts his legs around Rong's waist.
They left the piano.
-“The scenery outside the window isbeautiful.”
Cold at the back,hot in front.
The Enterance is deeper and deeper.
Shaking.
Depth.
Hot.
Pain.
Comfort.
Satisfaction.
落地窗外的月亮高悬于夜空，皎洁如水，撩动人心。
最后：①抱歉阿，我本来想写钢琴play的，但是，我查了一下，黑色斯坦威演奏级三角钢琴的高度，只有101……我想了一下，我觉得容哥的腿不止这么长，最后就改到落地窗了……
②我是个英语渣，为了写这个，就用了百度翻译，有道词典……再加上我的语法笔记……求英语大佬勿喷！！我是只可爱的英语学渣哦～
③emm……其实，我觉得有点ooc……
④我爱容哥和影帝！！！！
⑤姐妹们，江湖再见哦～