评《我有一个秘密》

作者:木泽竹雨

My princess:
It was the second day of senior high school entrance examination afternoon about 13:00.Although there were so many people.I saw you with the first sight.You were the brightest star over there and I fell in love with you.I cant control myself to follow you,knowing which examination room you were.And I also tried my best to know your school .My brain was full of you when I was testing.
Because of you I came to Da Guan.You are here,so I am here.Otherwise I do not know where I am now and what I am doing now.
When I missed you anytime and anywhere I knew I am helpless.I searched from Internet knowing it is not a kind of disease.I am health whether physical or mental.Please do not take me as a freak.
I was not fallen love with someone before except you.It is the first time I love someone.At the same time this one is a boy,so am I.I do not know what to do.What I did at ordinary were trying to catch your mind.Do you think I seem to be a silly boy?Not seem to be,I am.
Every time I saw you crying.I felt very sad.I want to talk with you and give you a hug.But I have no dare to do that,because I am afraid you see me with a terrible vision.
I have bought many \"Mind Act Upon Mind\".When you want to cry for paining,just cry.I will give you tissues to wipe away your tears.Do not be afraid.I will be here always with you.When someone bully you,I will bully that one back.
You like eating White Rabbit rolls.Can I buy one for you everyday?
My dad said man should be responsible.I think I am.I love you and never give up or hold back.Either I did not love you,or I love you forever.
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Somewhere,has long been destined.Such a huge world I also can meet you.Do you think so?
My princess,I love you,truly love you so much.Even you do not love me,I love you.Even you will not love me forever,I always love you.Huang Dan,I love you ever after.
——CY
来自英语渣的渣翻,应该有很多错误。因为想翻,所以翻了_(:зゝ∠)_陈越的情书好可爱啊啊啊,可惜陈越以为阿黄根本没看就丢了,想想后面还有当面告白拒绝QAQ
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[1楼] 网友:取名字好难  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:21:08
看的我一年蒙蔽
[2楼] 网友:取名字好难  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:21:19
呸,一脸懵逼
[3楼] 网友:木泽竹雨  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:24:38
啊啊啊第一句翻漏了第一次见你………
[4楼] 网友:叶不羞  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:25:46
懵逼
[5楼] 网友:木泽竹雨  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:31:43
不要懵逼啊,我用的词都比较简单的啊_(:3」∠)_
[6楼] 网友:温  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:33:27
从来没有及过格的英语渣渣望着这天书
[7楼] 网友:尔言  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:35:46
真的好可爱……
[8楼] 网友:彩虹  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:36:13
哇 这个棒
[9楼] 网友:22715766  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:39:36
大体上懂的,楼主你好牛逼啊!星星眼
[10楼] 网友:萝卜酱  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:40:06
_(:з」∠)_好腻害~
[11楼] 网友:亲爱的.  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:40:41
666
[12楼] 网友:季辜卢  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:42:35
6666666
[13楼] 网友:伊人在湄  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:43:07
可以啊,看得懂
[14楼] 网友:倩倩  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:49:36
高中作文水平,看得懂
[15楼] 网友:七月霓裳  发表时间:2017-07-14 12:56:31
我个英语渣渣勉强能看懂,666
[16楼] 网友:木泽竹雨  发表时间:2017-07-14 13:09:33
哈哈哈哈确实是高中英语作文水平,上大学就没好好学英语
[17楼] 网友:辜负年华  发表时间:2017-07-14 13:20:21
只看得懂开头亲爱的公主,还有结尾的陈越
[18楼] 网友:萌萌龙猫  发表时间:2017-07-14 13:47:28
第三个版本,大大的读者都好牛啊
[19楼] 网友:十  发表时间:2017-07-14 15:22:43
向大佬低头!
[20楼] 网友:木泽竹雨  发表时间:2017-07-14 17:49:15
手动顶,希望太太能翻个牌子【手动doge】
[21楼] 作者回复 发表时间:2017-07-21 09:48:15
来了来了来了,宝贝能把第一次见你加上去吗?你这个接近陈越
[22楼] 网友:木泽竹雨  发表时间:2017-07-21 19:14:46
啊啊啊啊啊翻牌子了,好的我加我马上加,第一句最后加when I first met you.