我只是帮着翻译了下刚才那篇煽情文啊

作者:gunhowitzer

(翻译)关于端木
I didn’t plan to say it but… after reading this chapter, I just have to say…
我本来没想说这个的……但是在读完这章之后,我实在是不得不说……
Please don’t make Chun Chun becomes the best doctor or has the best medical skill. Even without it, he is awesome the way he is…
请不要让春春变成个神医或有什么妙手回春的本领。就算没有这些,他本来也是了不起的
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There is one thing that makes Chun Chun different from most of the main characters in this series, it is the fact that he is best at nothing.
春春在有一件事上和其他的所有主角都不同,那就是他没有什么技压群芳的本领
In terms of good looks and wealth, he is not as good as Xue Linh Bi and Hua Huai Xiu
说到相貌和财富,他比不上薛灵璧和花淮秀
In terms of martial arts, he is nowhere near Yuan Ao Ce or Ji Miao Hua
说到武功,他不及袁傲策和姬妙花
In terms of cunning and smartness, he is far behind Feng Gu Dao, Ji Wu Di or Fan Ji Jing
说到聪明才智以及狡黠,他远远落在冯古道,纪无敌和樊jijing之后
But, if you ask, do people love him any less? I believe many people would say “maybe not”. As for fans of Chun Chun, it would be a flat “absolutely no”.
但是,如果有人问,人们是不是因为这些就不那么爱他呢?我相信人们或说“也许不会”。而对于春春的fans,他们会说“绝对不会”
Then what makes Chun Chun such a lovely person?
那么,为什么春春是个可爱的人呢?
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First and first and first, it is his looks. Don’t try to deny it,you can’t. Every girl likes hot guys or cool guys, including you and me and the author Bing Zi. And Chun Chun, even though not the best, is definitely one of the best good looking guys in the series.
首先首先首先,是他的相貌。不要企图否认,你也不能否认。每个女孩都喜欢性感的男孩儿或者酷哥,包括你和我和饼子。春春,虽然不是最好的,但也是最好的几个人之一
I will do something as repetitive and boring as describing Chun Chun once more, even though I know that many many people here have again and again described his appearance in their comments, and many many others still remember how he looks without being reminded of it. But, like Chun Chun said painting Ming Zun twice was not enough, I think describing Chun Chun one (or a few) more time was acceptable.
我要再次描述一下春春,尽管这显得反复以及无聊;尽管我知道很多很多人都已经一次又一次地在他们的留言里描述过他的外貌;尽管更多的人不需要提醒就能清楚地记起他的容貌。但是,就像春春说明尊被画两次也不够(?译者有种错过情节的感觉),我认为描述春春若干次也是可以接受的。
Let’s look back all the way from the first story in the series, Xiu Mu, when the author has not yet realized that Chun Chun was her real son. She made fun of him, let Ji Wu Di and Yuan Ao Ce bully him and rob his jewel chessboard and □, shattered his home and killed his dad…. but, maybe due to the unrealized family bond deep down inside her, or maybe due to the never dying love for hot guys, she still awarded Chun Chun with a dazzling appearance.
让我们从头来看这个系列的第一个故事,朽木。当作者还没有意识到春春才是她亲生儿子(我很怀疑啊?),她让他成为一个搞笑的人物,让纪无敌和袁傲策取笑他,要走了他的珠宝棋盘(我为什么这么想哭??),毁了他的家,害了他的父亲……但是,也许是因为还没有意识到她内心对于这个家庭的深深羁绊,也或许是因为她一直都只对英俊的家伙有爱(不是我说的),她仍然给了他一个温润如玉的外表(哼!)
The first time Chun Chun appeared in this story, he was like “the light of the early raising sun, clear away the darkness before the eyes of Ji Wu Di, let him see brightly” (I know it is suck, I am sorry, but I can’t translate better T__T)
春春第一次出场时,他就像“一缕晨光,洗尽纪无敌眼前的黯淡,让他双目一亮”(我尽力了哟)
The next time we saw him, he was “dressed in snowy white, elegant like the water and the mountain, but his eyes were tainted with weary and sadness”.
第二次我们看见他,他“身着一袭雪衣,如山水般隽雅,但是他的眼睛流露出些许惆怅”
Chun Chun’s appearance was not described in details in Bai Xu, only as a white silhouette in the snowy sky whose face was blurred by the snow. But it is here that Bing Zi gave Chun Chun the best description, though it was done through the lies of Xue Linh Bi, as “the most elegant”. Although it is short and simple, I think that line suits Chun Chun the most.
春春的外表在败絮里没有被详细地描述,只是作为一个雪空中的白色剪影,雪模糊了他的脸部。但这就是饼子在这里给他的最好的描述,尽管这是在薛灵璧的谎言中。“作为最优雅的”(忘记原文了……)。尽管这短小精简,但是我认为那句台词最适合他。
Move on to Shi Ru, Chun Chun once again shined brightly in the eyes of Tao Mo, being as gentle and elegant as the moon and the snow. In this story, Chun Chun’s beauty has one new value: being used as sedative for Tao Mo.(You still remember when they had lunch at Xian Wei restaurant, Tao Mo did not want to be affected by Yi Yu so he looked at Chun Chun to calm himself down?)
继续往下看,到识汝不识丁,作为如雪月般温良雅致的公子,春春又一次在陶墨眼里闪耀出了光彩。这个故事中,春春的美又有了一个新的元素:被用作陶墨的sedative(不认识)。当他们在饭店吃饭的时候,陶墨通过看向春春的方式来使自己冷静下来。
All the time we see him, all the time he shines in his gentle way. But the most beautiful image of Chun Chun in my mind is still the one in You Zhu, where Bing Zi described Chun Chun like “a cool breeze in a hot summer day”, “the new moon in the sky of fireworks”. So modest, but so pleasing. People feel warm and relaxed just by looking at him, or in my case, thinking of him.
每次我们看见他,他都以他温文的风度而引人注目。但是我脑海中最美的画面仍是当有珠何须椟中,饼子把春春描述为“夏日里的一股清风”、“烟火空中的一轮新月”。如此这般谦虚,但是却如此的令人心旷神怡。对人们来说,看到他都会感觉到温暖和轻松;而我,甚至在想到他的时候也有同样的心情。
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When there is a first, there is a next. Although Chun Chun has a beautiful dazzling gentle elegant appearance, that was not all he has. Even more than his appearance, it is his positive thinking and kind-heartedness that makes him different from most others.
事情总是接二连三的出现 。尽管春春有着美丽迷人的、优雅温文的外表、他还有着其他的品质。除却外表之外,他的乐观和善良明显得将他和其他人区分开来。
I admire it when his home was shattered, his dad died but he was still able to let go of revenge and chose to requite Ming Zun’s favors.
我欣赏他。因为他能够在家破人亡的情况下放弃复仇,去选择报答明尊。
I love it when he was captured and sold as a slave, but could still think positively(i.e. think about Ming Zun) to encourage himself.
我爱他。因为当他被抓住并被以奴隶的身份卖掉时,仍然能够乐观地鼓励自己。
(affected by Shi Qi’s comment, I really doubt if it was how Ming Zun survived at Xue Linh Bi’s place or if it was Ming Zun himself that Chun Chun was thinking of)
I adore it when Chun Chun, while poisoned by Ji Qing Lan, could still see the good in him while so many readers hate him so much.
我崇拜他。因为当他被激情蓝下了毒之后,还能够在激情蓝身上看到有点,而不像那么多读者那样痛恨他(我是尊重原文的,尊重原文的!)
(I know Shi Ji saw it too, but she wasn’t poisoned by Ji Qing Lan so Chun Chun is still a bit more kind-hearted)
So, if it is Chun Chun’s appearance that makes me notice him, it is his inner beauties that makes me love and admire him.
所以,如果春春的外貌让我注意到他,那么他的内在美使我爱着他,欣赏着他。(我以后要写情书一定不会比这个肉麻!我为了大家用了我人生最肉麻的句子~)
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After so much ranting, let me go back to my original purpose of writing all these. What I wanna say is that the current Chun Chun has so many good points, but they are not always described clearly and repeatedly enough for the readers to recognize and value them. So I am afraid that if the author, as the true mother of Chun Chun, wants him to be able to learn from the white jade Guan Yin statue and become one with the best medical skill, that fact alone would make his other qualities, other than his looks, dull and not noticeable.
在如此多的抱怨之后,让我回到主题吧。我想说的是,现在的春春有如此多的优点,但是这些优点没有被直白的写出,也没有着重到能让读者们意识到他并尊重他。所以我恐怕如果饼子,也就是春春的亲妈(是亲妈?!?!?!)想要他从白玉观音中学到惊人的医术,那将会是他的诸多其他品质,除了他的外貌,黯淡且易于忽略。
There has been a Xue Linh Bi, who has wealth, prestige and martial arts but all people remember is his good looks. I would not want Chun Chun to be one with good looks, a bright mind and a kind heart but all people remember is his (not yet but may be acquired) medical skill.
So please, let Chun Chun be the current 肩不能抗手不能提,文不成武不就,琴棋书画样样不精的端木回春. Hua Hua, and we too, love him the way he is….
我们已经有了拥有财富,地位和武功的薛灵璧,但是其实人们记住的还是只是他的好相貌。我不会想让春春成为一个虽然聪明英俊善良,但是人们还是只是记住他的医术的人(我反对~~我觉得他就算医术无人能及人们也还是会记住他打酱油的时候的,hoho)
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P.S.: I am sorry for writing this in English. I would write it in Chinese but I can’t, the fact is I don’t know any Chinese and cannot write even one Chinese word.
I know my English sucks too, but please forgive me. I have tried my best >___<
又及:我很抱歉用英文写了这篇文章。我真想用汉语写啊,但是我是在不能。事实上我并不知道多少汉语,就更别提写了。
我知道我英文也不好,但请原谅我,我已经尽力了(您到底是说什么语的啊~~)/

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[1楼] 网友:MUSE  发表时间:2011-07-31 18:49:23
这又可以算一篇长评了…
[2楼] 网友:kakasha  发表时间:2011-07-31 18:50:16
身为一个英语无能星人看到这么多英文我实在是……
情何以堪啊!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[3楼] 网友:xiaoyu  发表时间:2011-07-31 18:53:38
看完了,我觉得本篇写这个文的本尊是长评里难得正直之人【泥奏凯
就从春春各种方面来写的,听中肯的总结,不是鸡血产物,或怎么样,就根本从春春来说的
总之也不知道怎么说,就是给我正直啊正直这样的赶脚
饼大你快看!有海外同胞看着你,你不觉得太鸡血吗?!鸡血就快了更吧【扭动扭动
我已经存了2篇没看了,打算多存些,但是有那谁或粉【哔-】的话我就……咳咳,你懂的
还有翻译妹纸你也很萌的有木有,翻的真的是太努力了GJ而且旁边的吐槽更加的GJ
代替不能打中文的华侨妹纸谢谢翻译妹纸了=3=
[4楼] 网友:Mohanzi  发表时间:2011-07-31 18:56:41
您哪国嗒
[5楼] 网友:桃花仙  发表时间:2011-07-31 19:48:06
疑问:长评君最后注明说“并不知道多少汉语”。那怎么看文啊?!还是说饼子在写中文版的同时还有写英文版!
感慨:学好一门外语真的是很重要啊!如今看没有翻译的美剧需要英文好,听英文歌曲要明白歌词要英文好,现在连看长评都得一手拿着英文字典,一边开着金山快译啊!
佩服:我是英盲,所以无法对原长评君的语法做出判断,但是通过翻译后,恍然明白四个大字“写的真好”。
感谢:翻译君,你太贴心了!
[6楼] 网友:某球  发表时间:2011-08-01 13:30:59
“作为最优雅的”(忘记原文了……)。
原文是“雅极端木”
[7楼] 网友:拉线不拉灯  发表时间:2011-08-01 13:59:19
搞的俺产生了一种用英文写评的冲动……【你奏凯!
[8楼] 网友:晴空  发表时间:2011-08-01 14:00:46
他说他是越南人看文用的是翻译软件。。神人呀佩服
[9楼] 网友:junji0219  发表时间:2011-08-01 15:08:47
可是他之前也中文回复过的那~~~~
[10楼] 网友:萱然  发表时间:2011-08-01 20:58:35
说到相貌和财富,他比不上薛灵璧和花淮秀
说到武功,他不及袁傲策和姬妙花
果然候爷是让人记不住武功滴~
[11楼] 网友:packyderm_红  发表时间:2011-08-01 21:58:58
sedative是镇静剂的意思
[12楼] 网友:packyderm_红  发表时间:2011-08-01 22:01:11
sedative是镇静剂的意思^^..
[13楼] 网友:有情风月  发表时间:2011-08-04 21:03:54
为毛我觉得败絮里没提几次侯爷的好相貌哇……我觉得侯爷的看点也不在美貌上TAT
[14楼] 作者回复 发表时间:2011-08-13 13:29:01
翻译得真好!
辛苦了。话说再用中文看一遍,更觉得conma不容易啊,不知道白玉观音她是肿么理解的。
伏地拜谢长评。╭(╯3╰)╮这么一长篇下来,真的很辛苦哇。翻译比阅读辛苦多了!按摩按摩……松松筋骨。
[15楼] 网友:巴妻  发表时间:2011-08-13 23:51:27
哇~来自越南的~好帅好强大!
[16楼] 网友:梨花  发表时间:2011-10-03 14:48:07
我只能赞叹,强!!英语强,翻译也强
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